In Class We Had to Write something Inspired from Dr.Seuss So I Chose Fox and sock and made my Own Tongue twister.
Hen had hacked hot headphones
Headphones in hot hole
Hen jumped into hole
Headphones on hare with hair
That was here who did not care
About his handwriting cause
Hen hacked his headphones In hot hole
Tht hailed headphones on hares with hair and put
Them here
Hello Arpit
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison, I am a year 6 student a Yaldhurst Model School or Yms for short.
I really liked your toung twister and tried to read it it was super cool.
Maybe next time put a full stop at the end of each line and at the end of the post,a good tip is to re read and get a friend to double cheek it just so you can pick up those little mistakes.
Ka Pai
Kind Regards Maddison from YMS
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ReplyDeleteHi Arpit, my name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School, this tongue twister that you made was really tricky, even if I was reading in my head I still got stuck on some sentences.
ReplyDeleteI know that Dr.Seuss has a lot of rhymes and different types of writing like, some poems and tongue twisters, since I used to read the books when I was little. Was it easy to write? also how long did it take you to write it?
Awesome work!
Mia
Hi Arpit, My name is Julia and I am a year 7 from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI really like your tongue twisters. I was thinking that maybe next time you could add what your favourite tongue twister was. Apart from that great post.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
hi arpit my name is Rihanna and im from yaldhurst model school I like your post I like the way you gave your work no colour
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