Hello Arpit. My name is Maddison I am a year six at Yaldhurst Model School ( YMS for short ) I really liked this post because at yaldhurst we are learning about the commonwealth and the commonwealth games so it was good to learn some more facts about it.
I found that there was one thing that might help you with google slides, It's that if you put in some pictures it would make it more eye catching it was still an amazing blog post
Hello arpit. Eben from yaldhurst school here this post reminded me of our commonwealth study I enjoyed the part about the benefits and responsibilities maybe next time you could more in depth with answer because they were short and therefore making it a shorter time of reading it other then that good job Kind regards Eben
Hello Arpit. My name is Maddison I am a year six at Yaldhurst Model School ( YMS for short )
ReplyDeleteI really liked this post because at yaldhurst we are learning about the commonwealth and the commonwealth games so it was good to learn some more facts about it.
I found that there was one thing that might help you with google slides, It's that if you put in some pictures it would make it more eye catching it was still an amazing blog post
kind regards - Maddie
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ReplyDeleteEben from yaldhurst school here this post reminded me of our commonwealth study I enjoyed the part about the benefits and responsibilities maybe next time you could more in depth with answer because they were short and therefore making it a shorter time of reading it other then that good job
Kind regards Eben
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